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Week 15 Concept Worksheet

Week 15 Concept Worksheet

Q Take the paragraph from the second draft of the final essay and make some revision. Mention both the paragraphs.

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I have used the methods of comparison to the familiar things. Now, this process has been implied because it will create a sense of awareness in the readers and they can relate with their daily lifestyle. Here, I have talked about the negative sides of the diabetes and making people aware with the similar terms and expression is indeed necessary. I felt this is effective because readers may get bored when they have been lectured about their lifestyle but what exactly is causing this order can be put up with the simple and familiar expressions.